.:Dance Through The Sun:.

I like the use of composition and camera choices here. I think that it could be better if the model were actually in the air as if she were being lifted up into the sun, as that would match the title even better. And as far the dress goes, its cool but its also distracting, I think it would be better to have had a warm colored dress made from cotton or something so that it would match the environment better, or perhaps even just be nude, if your model would be okay with that. The other thing I see is the scarf, I think that could have also made for some good stopped motion if she were to have had it in her upper hand, dancing with it. Anyways, its a good picture and I'm sure you've thought about how you could improve this before, but those are just some things that I would have personally done. Everyone has their own style